How is it not compelling bro?
Are we even reading the same copy OR did I grossly misread your post (apolozies in that case)?
But fear not, for the Khan rides with you, and by the oath of his sword he shall ride by your side and help you defeat your enemies.
A warrior is created through many battles. A Khan is created through earth-shattering, heaven-splitting action.
Women will begin paying attention, their eyes will start glazing over as they witness your regal magnificence as their minds fill with images of what you are capable of. ๐๐ป๐ฑ ๐ฎ ๐๐ต๐ฎ๐ป ๐ถ๐ ๐ฐ๐ฎ๐ฝ๐ฎ๐ฏ๐น๐ฒ ๐ผ๐ณ ๐บ๐ฎ๐ป๐, ๐บ๐ฎ๐ป๐ ๐๐ต๐ถ๐ป๐ด๐, ๐ด๐ฟ๐ฒ๐ฎ๐ ๐ฎ๐ป๐ฑ ๐๐ฒ๐ฟ๐ฟ๐ถ๐ฏ๐น๐ฒ, ๐ผ๐ป๐ฒ๐ ๐๐ต๐ฎ๐ ๐๐ถ๐น๐น ๐บ๐ฎ๐ธ๐ฒ ๐๐ต๐ฒ ๐บ๐ผ๐๐ ๐ฏ๐ฒ๐ฎ๐๐๐ถ๐ณ๐๐น ๐๐ผ๐บ๐ฎ๐ป ๐๐พ๐๐ถ๐ฟ๐บ ๐ถ๐ป ๐ต๐ฒ๐ฟ ๐๐ฒ๐ฎ๐, ๐ต๐ฒ๐ฟ ๐ณ๐ฎ๐ฐ๐ฒ ๐ณ๐น๐๐๐ต๐ฒ๐ฑ ๐ฎ๐ป๐ฑ ๐ต๐ฒ๐ฟ ๐ต๐ฒ๐ฎ๐ฟ๐ ๐ฏ๐ฒ๐ฎ๐๐ถ๐ป๐ด ๐ผ๐๐ ๐ผ๐ณ ๐ต๐ฒ๐ฟ ๐ฐ๐ต๐ฒ๐๐.
The indomitable power, the raw sexuality, the gaze of pure seduction, the mannerisms of an empire-conqueror and the desire of a tiger. Combined, and regardless of who she is, she will feel it. Her knees will tremble, her lips will quiver, her mind will race and you will forevermore be in her thoughts. Be the Khan and fulfill her wildest desires. Do not make her wait.
Can you think of a SINGLE way to make these sentences better? Coz I canโt.